- Title: The Ward
- Author: Nadine Banna
- Published: 2017
- Rating: 4/5
The Ward tells the tale of John and his wife Clarisse. We are made to believe that Clarisse is visiting her husband in a psychiatric ward, however we are not told why. For the majority of the short story we are focusing on Clarisse’s efforts to comfort her husband but we’re left in suspense. With a surprising 360 turn of events we discover that everything we thought we knew was incorrect.
It’s difficult to pinpoint the genre of this story as it would be restrictive to categorise it as simply being a ‘thriller’, a ‘mystery’ or a ‘drama’ because it has elements of each conventions. This cross using of specific genres adds a certain elevation to the reading of the short story as the suspense and intrigue from this makes it even more exciting. This is never more noticeable than at the beginning of The Ward. The use of the singular nominative pronoun ‘she’ restricts our understanding and knowledge of the events of the story. The repetition of the pronoun and use of simple short sentences adds a speed, quickness to the narration, further adding to the intrigue and thrill of the piece.
My initial thoughts when reading The Ward was that through the minimalistic information about the characters and events it meant that we were experiencing and following John and Clarisse’s journey with them. That we are experiencing these events for the first time just like the characters. The only way we begin to understand what is going on is through the description of the characters behaviours and use of adjectives ‘reassuring smile’, ‘reanimated by her sound’, ‘face lit up with a smile’. We begin to see a development and progress in the storyline and their relationship.
Furthermore, we are following the story through Clarisse’s perspective which adds a certain air of mystery, especially through the use of ellipsis. Her conviction that she was visiting her husband in a psychiatric ward and the use of ellipsis suggests that something is being left out either on purpose or by mistake of the character, either way it draws the reader’s attention to the mysterious element of the story. Later on, during the couple’s conversation about their son, the ellipsis adds weight to the emotion and tension. However, the repetitiveness of this device seems a bit excessive. At first it added to the atmosphere and suspense but after the first few it didn’t seem necessary to create this. However, the ellipses at the end of the story adds an emotional element, a sense that their heartache and psychological trauma within the narrative can’t be fixed.
Besides the overuse of ellipses and the occasional change in tense I really enjoyed reading this short story. It was beautifully written and the author has a real talent for making the read enjoyable.
If you want to read @NadineBanna short story the URL is: https://nadinebanna14.wordpress.com/2017/06/22/the-ward/
This sounds like a really interesting story. I do hate tense changes, but I could probably overlook it and give this a read!
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You should definitely give it a go!
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You should definitely read it:)
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This sounds like a story I would read. I love stories that actually make oyu think and dive into the heads of the characters.
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You should give it a go!
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You did a great job of reviewing the book and getting my interested in the storyline. It sounds quite unusual and different.
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Thank you 🙂
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Reblogged this on A Piece of me and commented:
Special thanks for Jade Amelia Alice Braham for her professional and constructive review of my latest short story; “The ward”. Do check out her review and her blog as a literature reviewer!
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Thank you @nadinebanna it was great working with you!
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Thank you so much for the professional and constructive review! It is brilliantly writteb and analyzed with lots of insight for possible improvements! Keep up the good work!
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Thank you very much! Glad you liked the review 🙂
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This sounds like a compelling story and one that will make it hard to put down. I like how you said you felt like you were experiencing the journey with them.
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Thank you:)
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Interesting!
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Well now I just have to read this book! I am going to be checking it out since I love a mix of drama and suspense!
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You really should!
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From your review I can say that it’s an interesting book. I like these kinds of reading and will gve it a try.
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Thank you! I hope the story doesn’t disappoint you!
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This sounds like a good book. It also reminds me a movie I just can’t remember the name of it.
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Thank you! It does sound like a movie! But I don’t know which one 😂
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This sounds intriguing and now I’m wanting to read it for myself lol. Will need to look for this one 💕
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I’ve put the link to the website that it’s on at the end of my review!
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Awesome! It’ll be easier for me to find then lol 😉
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I am not sure how I would feel about the ellipses at the end of something. It would definitely bring tension in the reader though.
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Sounds a great book – thanks for the link!
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Thank you and no worries! I hope you enjoy the book!
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good to read, well written
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Thank you
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Thank you for the review. I saw something online about it and saved it to my Goodreads list.
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Thank you! Hope you enjoy!
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I love books like these! I need to pick this one up. I’ll put it on my to-read list for July.
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Hope you enjoy!
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Nice review, this book sounds interesting. I will try find and read it myself. Thanks!
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Hope you enjoy!
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Your review was well written and left me very interested in the story. I loved how you left a link to the short story at the end of your review.
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Thank you!
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Nice book review, this book really sounds interesting. hope to read it soon. Thanks!
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Thank you! I hope you enjoy it!
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That sounds like an intriguing story. Your review left me curious to find out what was actually going in the book!
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Thank you! I wold recommend it!
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This sounds like a must read story! I love it when we can’t simply define the category of the story,, well done reviewing it, and making me want to read it!!
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thank you! if you read it I hope you enjoy!
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I was reading your review hoping there would be no spoilers but you didn’t let me down, you reviewed it so well! I am surely going to read it ASAP, you’ve convinced me in the 1st paragraph.
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Btw where did you get the book? I can’t find it.
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It’s written by a fellow blogger on her blog! I put the URL link at the end of my blog post!
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I guess I was so hasty looking for it that I completely missed that! Thank you!
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No worries! Enjoy!
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Thank you very much! I hope you enjoy it:)
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Ok I need to read more books.. Damn, it’s been a while.. I love your book reviews.
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Thank you very much!
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That sounds like a really good book!
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When I used to write stories I know that ‘excessive use’ of ellispses was one of my weaknesses and you are right it can affect the narrative. That being said I am interested to see how they broach the subject of mental health.
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You have me so intrigued now, from my having read your review. I will have to go and check it out now and read through it for myself. Thank you for posting your review.
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Thank you:) hope you enjoy the read!
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I’m not sure whether this is the right kind of book for me – books around mental health issues can be a little too close to home for me. However your review has intrigued me… maybe I’ll give it a try!
x
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Thank you! If you do read it I hope you enjoy it!
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Those are the type of stories I like!! I wonder if they have this on Audible.. 🙂
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I doubt it as it was written by a fellow blogger. As far as I’m aware you can only read it on her blog which I’ve put the URL link to at the end of my review! 🙂
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This looks a great book to read. I really need to find some spare time to start reading again. Thanks for sharing!!
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Thank you! It’s very short – it’ll only take you 15 minutes to read 🙂
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I love these kind of thrillers. Those storylines make for great movies too! 🙂
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How did you know I was looking for a book of this… genre. I love that it is hard to define, and your review let me wanting to know more without giving away spoilers!
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thank you 🙂
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This sounds interesting! Am checking out the story now, and bookmarking for a time when I can sit and enjoy it!
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Thank you! hope you enjoy the read!
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This sounds like the kind of book I would like to read! I love reading and anything that holds my attention and keeps me reading!
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If that’s what you like then this book will definitely suit you!
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This sounds like an entertaining story. I think Im gonna add this to my summer books!thanks
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My curiosity to read the book was kept increasing as I was reading the review. It would be interesting to see that how mystery and thriller is maintained throughout!
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It sounds like an entertaining book, full of suspense and mystery of what’s gonna happen next. I like this kind of books that keep you reading page after page, to know what’s actually going on.
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What a great story review. I think I will go over the story. Sounds interesting.
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Thank you!
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This is a brilliant review, you have really encouraged me to read this story… it sounds so interesting!
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I’m sure this one has an interesting twist. I’d love to read the story and it’s definitely something that you can’t put down until you’re done reading.
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This sounds so interesting. Thanks so much for sharing this!
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This sounds like an interesting story. But I think that the changes in tense would really annoy me.
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I can understand that! changes in tense annoy me too but the story was so compelling that I managed to push it aside for this one!
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That’s so cool that you read and review the literature of other WordPress authors! This was a really concise review, and you made the story sound super interesting and worth reading as well! Great post!
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Thank you very much! I’m glad you enjoyed!
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This sounds like such a great book. I’ve been on the lookout for something new to read so I may pick it up and give it a try 🙂
Louise x
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Thanks a lot for this beautifully written review. You really make me wanna start reading it right now.
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You should! I recommend it:)
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This sounds like a super great read. I am a total book lover and always on the hunt for a new read.
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I have been looking for a great book to read – in terms of leisure and to keep my brain working even though I’m not in college anymore. Thanks for this recommendation!
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I hope you enjoy! 🙂
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